Friday, November 26, 2004

To Cindy

Somehow you were old, at 17.
I knew that you were dying,
and wouldn't last the summer,
but I took you home with me,
my college past, my life beginning
just as yours began its close.
Those ninety miles meant frequent stops to rest,
your coughing more severe,
and I could only hope my deep concern
would help sustain you on the way.

Two months more, I clung to you
and you to me through every day—
to hospital with my sister,
to my church to pray.

I know not where they buried you
or if they knew your fame—
or of the musicmen you served
and took from them your name.

I only know you were my first
and in your final days
my very own, my Cinderella
'35 most mortal Chevrolet!
~

The poem is true. My first car (a piece of junk but
it still ran...barely) after college (and it was my sister who she carried to the emergency room after a home accident) had been owned over time by both the concertmaster and the principal flutist of the Minneapolis Symphony Orchestra. I bought her from the latter gentleman for $50.00.

2 comments:

Duckie said...

You had this reader's attention from the first line. Your subsequent words gripped my heart with sorrow and fear for the loved Cindy. I was rooting for her, I did not want her to die!

Ah... what an ending...!!! I felt dismay coupled by self-disparagement for having been so sweetly fooled... quickly followed by relief in the revelation that Cindy was *just* a car...!

This is a perfect, touching eulogy to your first car :-) May all the firsts things, events and experiences in your life be as evocative.

Well done...

Ellie said...

Still love your poetry. My fingers feel all knotty and "tounge tied" as I type this in the presense of your writing. I was relieved as well that Cindy was "just a car".