Somehow you were old, at 17.
I knew that you were dying,
and wouldn't last the summer,
but I took you home with me,
my college past, my life beginning
just as yours began its close.
Those ninety miles meant frequent stops to rest,
your coughing more severe,
and I could only hope my deep concern
would help sustain you on the way.
Two months more, I clung to you
and you to me through every day—
to hospital with my sister,
to my church to pray.
I know not where they buried you
or if they knew your fame—
or of the musicmen you served
and took from them your name.
I only know you were my first
and in your final days
my very own, my Cinderella
'35 most mortal Chevrolet!
~
The poem is true. My first car (a piece of junk but
it still ran...barely) after college (and it was my sister who she carried to the emergency room after a home accident) had been owned over time by both the concertmaster and the principal flutist of the Minneapolis Symphony Orchestra. I bought her from the latter gentleman for $50.00.
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You had this reader's attention from the first line. Your subsequent words gripped my heart with sorrow and fear for the loved Cindy. I was rooting for her, I did not want her to die!
Ah... what an ending...!!! I felt dismay coupled by self-disparagement for having been so sweetly fooled... quickly followed by relief in the revelation that Cindy was *just* a car...!
This is a perfect, touching eulogy to your first car :-) May all the firsts things, events and experiences in your life be as evocative.
Well done...
Still love your poetry. My fingers feel all knotty and "tounge tied" as I type this in the presense of your writing. I was relieved as well that Cindy was "just a car".
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